Wednesday, April 6, 2011

HW 42


Dear, Chuck Schumer
            Have you ever seen the movie The Business of Being Born? Or have you ever read Ina Mays Guide to Childbirth by the famous midwife Ina May. If you have then you know exactly what this letter is about and if not then I’m sure you have an idea from the titles I just named. But let me start by introducing myself, my name is Alex Feldmann and I’m attending School of the Future high school in Manhattan. In my social studies class we have been learning about how the normal may not be so normal when you know about it. One of the topics that we have been studying is childbirth in America. When most people think of childbirth they think of a couple of things that contrast. First one may think of babies and all the joy that comes with having a baby. But in the hospital the experience is a lot different. There isn’t any joy to giving birth in a hospital at all. Birth isn’t looked upon as the start of a new life and great things to come; it’s looked upon as a medical emergency and a business. But still everybody does it because it is “the safe, traditional thing to do.” Well that’s what most people think at least. But from all the research my fellow peers and I have been doing in school and at home we’ve found that this well known statement may not be true. But the good part is that there is an alternative to all business and medical emergencies. This alternative is the way humans have lived since the start and have always been meant to live and this is home birthing. From what we’ve learned about midwives and homebirths in class its possible that birth doesn’t have to be laying on your back in a room where hundreds of people have been the same and not getting the proper emotional and not even the proper physical care that woman need to give a proper birth. Birth doesn’t have to be that painful horrifying story that we have all heard since we were children. So why if birth could be like this then why do most Americans not even consider it? It is because they don’t know and it is our job as Americans to educate the people to see that all the drugs and cesarean section surgery is not how things are suppose to be. Of course there are times where these procedures are absolutely necessary and no time should be wasted but when one in three woman are getting a dangerous surgery that may not even be necessary there is a problem. If you watch the movie the business of being born you will see exactly all the things that I mean when I say we need change. When you ask a woman why they wouldn’t have a home birth they will say that they trust the hospitals more. But what is more important the “safe” environment of a hospital filled with sick people where the woman are treated as a procedure rather then individuals, or a caring loving environment which will bond a woman and her baby for their whole lives. We are scared of change but there is proof that change is okay and can only do us good in this situation. We are the only country to give birth in hospitals and everything is wrong with it. Commercials should be made to educate the typical American who may not know this stuff. We need to change what’s normal to what’s natural and what us as humans were made to do.

5 comments:

  1. Alex

    In your letter you basically described the industrial atrocities of hospital births in the united states and why and how we can change the current situation america is in. I really liked your idea for change with commercials since they are practically what we see all the time. This project matters to me because it's straight to the point and i agree with it entirely.

    Great Post

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  2. Alex,

    In your post i noticed that your main focus was to show people all of the bad things that happen in a hospital. Pretty much trying to get people to"see the light" in a way. Your post was very well thought out and i would like to talk to you more about it so i can know more about your opinions on this matter.

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  3. Alex,

    I enjoyed reading this piece written to Chuck Schumer, and the basic concepts of the pro's and con's of Pregnancy/Births in the U.S. In your post you bring up good points that can be developed into powerful persuading statements for instance the bit where woman are prefer hospitals over midwifes because they trust the hospital more. Here, you can expand on how the doctor influence has a connatation of professionalism that sounds more reassuring than a midwife that a woman may know little about.

    Good Post!
    Christian

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  4. Alex,
    I understand your feelings of the importance of health care reform. You make a very good argument in the form of a letter about what is wrong with the way the hospital industry treats pregnant women. I was particularly interested in the enthusiasm that you had in this particular topic. I also appreciated the way you took existing information that you had and put it together with new information to form your arguments. I feel that this is an important topic to me personally because i want to have children one day and i will need to be well informed of the choices that there are. Good post
    Sam

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  5. Thanks everybody,
    Im glad you all like my letter. You all saw that I was trying to show all the pros and cons but it looked more like a lot of cons. Sam, I'm glad you caught the enthusiasm that I had while writing this. I feel like if you know that then it makes the letter a lot more meaningful.

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